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Thursday, March 23, 2006

MY FRIEND

this poem is for you
my dear old friend
to live on life's terms
I must learn once again

now in my new life
I have met so many
yet to touch my heart
there hasn't been any

you tell in your story
of a time and a place
you had what I wanted
so I remembered your face

you speak of a man
that I had once known
then you speak of another
in which you have grown

so our paths have crossed
not once but now twice
so the story you share
I must take as advice

2 Comments:

Blogger Jeri said...

This is a nice tribute to an old friend. Very cool.

9:02 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

I like the way this one flows. A good friend keeps coming back at you with good advice, till you're ready to "get" it. Good job.

8:46 AM  

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WHY OPPOSITES ATRRACT

When life's spirits lift you up;
do not ever forget-
What goes up always comes back down.

The stars will always appear
to guide us through the night.
Just as the sun will shine
Somedays so blindingly bright.

For all the tragic wrongs
There is also a beautiful right.
Not everything can be set
In only black or in white.

Know that life is truly about
Opposites attracting.
If we had no ins or outs
Ups and downs or days and nights

If every living creature were equal
Would we ever fit in another's life?

2 Comments:

Blogger Jeri said...

It's that yin and yang thing. Nice poem.

9:06 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

More people need to recognize and accept this in their lives. Thanks for another poem

8:30 AM  

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Wednesday, March 08, 2006

FREE

CRY NOW,CRY LATER
IT'S JUST GOT TO BE
I STAND BEWILDERED
OF WHAT I NOW SEE.

BEGINNING TO END
ALL WILL AGREE
IT'S TIME YO LET GO
AND SET MYSELF FREE.

3 Comments:

Blogger Nishu said...

Freeeee....!!!!!! weeeeeeeeeeeee.....

10:37 PM  
Blogger Jeri said...

Yeah, a new poem. I like it.

1:23 AM  
Blogger Unknown said...

Keep up the writing. This one was short but sweet and to the point. I liked it to.

9:12 AM  

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Thursday, February 23, 2006

Killing Yourself Softly


fighting and struggling
against all the odds
in contol trying not
to be God's God.

so I ask for guidance
to help you deal with
the pain and sorrow
that you refuse to feel.

I sit and I watch
the choices you make
my heart's torn in two
with what is at stake.

let me tell you,my love
the consequences are costly
as I can no longer watch
you killing yourself softly.

1 Comments:

Blogger Unknown said...

This one is pretty powerful and clearly written from a deep concern and sadness for someone.

I like the idea that you didn't capitalize the beginning word but put a period at the end. No capitalization gives me a feel of being or arriving in the middle of something that has been going on for awhile before I get here and the period is more like a hope or a promise for an end to it.

Only the poet really knows!

I like it!

9:24 AM  

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